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    dots Submission Name: Shards Of Red™©dots

    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsShards Of Red™©dots

    broken pieces
    lay on the floor

    mixed with tears of blood
    only the pain now
    knows your name

    Left behind in a hollow past
    blood stained roses

    grow in an empty plot
    willed to grow by tears of sorrow

    The pain of wounded heart
    yet strong yet so break-able

    that even in pain , love blooms
    the darkest of red , red roses


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