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    dots Submission Name: Strings(Cc)(TM)dots

    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    My heart feels like its on strings
    it wants to weep and weep

    So emotinal it woulnt ever let it go
    feeling these feelings

    knowing these emotions
    Feeling these devotions

    loving you
    wanting you
    just You....

    left a blank page ,
    only one track on my heart and soul

    up and down my vains
    like the blood flow , you've taken

    you own my soul
    touched my heart

    grasp at my body
    then never let it go

    Just you , only you
    Dive deeper , fall head over heels

    till these strings are gone


    Submitted on 2013-12-18 13:23:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      no , i do want to play though trust me ! i use to play acustic but that was ages ago i dont even remember how to play anymore lol

    please do look over my otheres n tell me what u think ! :)
    | Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
      I know this is kind of off subject but if you played guitar you'd have a hole new appreciation for those emotional strings. I'm happy to have the release!

    | Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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