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    dots Submission Name: Old Book(Cc)(TM)dots

    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       The One For Me And Only Me.

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    dotsOld Book(Cc)(TM)dots

    The tattered book laid on a shelf
    Neglected upon its last lover

    Torn are the pages
    the binding in disarray

    Words are barely readable
    one touch it would seem to turn to dust

    Then a Handsome stranger passes
    Gives the old book a good glance

    Here you go ,
    just need some mending
    and a good mans touch

    I'll love you ,
    breathe life back into your words

    I'll tell you things that you've
    never ever herd

    He speaks to the book so softly
    tender is your heart

    I'll hold it dear ,
    now let me see the pages
    with the words so clear

    Feelings and tears spill
    from the pages

    This poor book hasn't
    been open in age's

    Longing to share
    hidden desires,
    a lovers fire

    Warmth from the fingertips
    touching the spine

    Suddenly with new wings
    she came alive

    A love she said ,
    That will never die

    So the man held her tight
    Then kissed her goodnight

    Submitted on 2013-12-19 09:53:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      @Bruce ROFL no not in love with the librarian hahahaa , the OLD book was ref to me as a metafor , re-read it again , there is a hidden meaning behind it , most of my write there always are , the man i speak of is the man in my love life , before i meet him i felt like an old dusty book , laying in his arms one night my head began to spout words like a sonnet , but this depth to me , maybe im afraid to let it out , i feel that im to over emotional for him to handle ., i mean weve both had our share of heart ache hurt , miss trust , but there are just some things i think he isnt willing to get over , like his ex for one , i think she still holds a big piece of him , maybe i read into to much or maybe im just completely jealous , but is it wrong to be so selfish ? is it wrong to want something all to yourself ? to be stinging.?
    | Posted on 2013-12-20 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
      So you say your in love with the librarian, the keeper of the books. Of he truly loves each and every one. Often he makes a point of making sure certain books get read. Hum, what can I say I'm a hopeless romantic too. I wish a viable lover could be directed my way too.

    | Posted on 2013-12-20 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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