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    dots Submission Name: Blue Ocean{Cc}{TM}dots

    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       My Vast Deep Blue Ocean,With to many emotions

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    dotsBlue Ocean{Cc}{TM}dots

    My emotions , A deep blue ocean
    vast as far as the eyes can see

    Cool calm waters ,
    watch them ripple with the touch of a finger

    My love, like a tidal wave
    washing over all of your pain

    My Anger fierce like
    a Typhoon breaking destruction

    My soul , pure clean and true
    like the clearest of springs
    only devotion will it show you

    My Words , calm yet pleasant
    like a wading pool

    Dive deeper into me
    This deep blue ocean
    find the hidden path beneath
    thee emotion

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