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    dots Submission Name: Half Demon(Cc)(TM)dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    Description:
       Warm ,fuzzy friendship feelings


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    dotsHalf Demon(Cc)(TM)dots
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    Hanyo ,

    half Demon they call you
    Why art-thou a half demon?

    You've let me in
    i've touched you'r soul

    Friends till the bitter end
    now nothings out of control

    A claw for a claw
    white fuzzy ears

    Those cold snowy days
    when our memories faded away

    A black suit and a white dress
    back when our worlds were a mess

    We clung to each-other with hope of existence
    We weren't so Anonymous we knoe
    we existed

    A kindled flame ,
    A fated friendship

    Always be truthful my Demon
    worlds torn a-sunder

    That glimmer in your eyes
    As you look upon my face

    snow hitting the ground,
    time standing still in its place

    It all seems like it was ,
    just yesterday

    When I was lost then i was found
    i've never been alone
    since you've been around


















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