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    dots Submission Name: IceQueen™©dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 491
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       Rivers of tears flow from my eyes,pain buried deep inside


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    dotsIceQueen™©dots
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    Ice Queen ,
    So cold Don't touch me

    I'm fragile , I'm broken
    Hollow , Empty inside

    The touch of death on my fingers
    everything i love is just a lie

    My Skin so pale like the snow
    that sits in the palm of my hand

    There's no blood flow
    My heart is thumping , Am i alive ?

    Born Undead ,But yet i'm alive.

    I'm crystal you can see right through me
    But when you stare deep into my eyes

    Do you really even see me ?
    The one fighting , The one hanging on

    That lost little girl , buried in the snow
    Who keeps searching for warmth
    Yet never to found it

    On the outside i'm oh so cold
    Don't touch me i don't want to break

    Falling apart inside is my heart
    Not even strong enough to melt
    This unending ice

    It forms around me ,
    My protective barrier
    Lock away ones heart

    Cold as death hollow ,pale
    i'm the ice queen
    Love does not prevail


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      I guess in the social communalism of it. We community share our love of literacy, the desire to express ourselves in words. Even when we don't agree we're still sharing. As for the emotional addictions romance can cause often it's the personal strengths we have to give as much as the harmony we make. I see the fire in your eye, let it warm you. Even if you learn you must live without him your spirit must be the flame in your hearth. Don't give in to self deprecation, it only means less to give. Campfire I that I said as I tossed on another log.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      @monad
    Love to be found , where are you looking at ?
    a campfire cant warm me , its that inner deep connection that deep dieing longing devotion
    soul mate material that can melt this ICE
    see i thought recently that ive found it
    truely i wanted to feel nothing but that , but something struck me today that the one i truely love
    doesnt feel the same way ? honestly i think hes bored with me , .... but i guess i cant even sum of the courage to ask ,
    | Posted on 2013-12-19 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
      A little bit of frolicking frivolity on that. I know almost obnoxious of me but I kind of like the warm campfire here at ES. There is love to be found!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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