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    dots Submission Name: We Agreedots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 5/114/129
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 524
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    dotsWe Agreedots
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    I speak of hardship.
    Then get insulted for it.

    I feel nothing but anger.
    You insist on making it worse.

    I hate everything about me.
    Guess we agree on one thing...




    Submitted on 2013-12-19 16:19:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I know it sounds serious but there I'm getting humor as well, particularly because of the ending. Oh... and I like the length.
    | Posted on 2014-08-22 00:00:00 | by Meera | [ Reply to This ]
      Your dad can go die in a fucking hole!
    | Posted on 2013-12-19 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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