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    dots Submission Name: Whydots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsWhydots
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    Why?
    Why do i even try?
    Try to please you.
    Try to show you who i am.
    Try to be the guy you want me to be.
    Why can't i give up?
    Give up on trying.
    Give up on being a joke.
    Give up on caring anymore.
    Why must i be this way?
    Be the failure.
    Be the loser.
    Be the lost soul.
    Why is this my fate?
    Destined to be alone.
    Destined to die alone.
    Destined to fall and never get back up.
    Why... Oh why am i this way...




    Submitted on 2013-12-19 22:51:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Sounds like the 'perks' of being with an ungrateful, inconsiderate person. I like this one!
    | Posted on 2014-08-22 00:00:00 | by Meera | [ Reply to This ]
      Personally, perhaps your not that way, but your sure trying to talk yourself into it. Of we're born alone, in we die alone, still, while we live, we get back up and reach for something more comforting. Sometimes we have to accept when things are not as we hoped they were meant to be and move on.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-20 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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