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1,000 Words {CC}{TM}


Author: kyserin
ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
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Words: 82
Class/Type: Riddle /What is
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Time and the state of mind


1,000 Words {CC}{TM}



Time goes so slow when you're alone
I watch the hands go around the clock
maybe hoping one day , it will just stop

Freeze that frame, that tiny moment
holding on so long ti'll you've almost forgot it

Picture this a state of mind ,
what's locked away deep inside

1,000 words when you look at me
So tell me honestly what do you see?







Submitted on 2013-12-20 14:16:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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   I see in this riddle a sensitive person searching for the meaning of it all. I like that. Some never search, never question but follow some dogma instead, reacting instead of thinking. The Tiger/woman pic is great.
| Posted on 2013-12-22 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
  I know this may seem off target but we are integrations in time. Finite concatenations, in this is the essence of consciousness' constituency. I say make it work for you and it will become the key to unlocking yourself. There is something to be said for moving slowly. Perhaps more intellectual than emotional but we are sentient animals. We owe it to ourselves.

Bruce
| Posted on 2013-12-20 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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