Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Phoenixdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 602
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 643



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPhoenixdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I'll show you all my strength.
    I will prove to you my loyalty.
    You will not stop me.
    I am one of the strongest there is.
    Strongest there ever will be.

    Because when you knock me down...
    When you kick me while i'm there...
    When you kick dirt in my face...
    When you burn my body...
    When you tell me i'm worthless...
    When you tell me i'm pathetic...

    I come back twice as strong.
    I come back twice as determined.
    Because i will rise from the ashes.
    And i will show you all...
    That i am the Immortal Phoenix.




    Submitted on 2013-12-20 16:28:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      :) Really
    | Posted on 2013-12-20 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198475

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Incubus written by monad
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Bond written by saartha
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Giving written by jjd
    Break Up written by WriteSomething

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry