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    dots Submission Name: Phoenixdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I'll show you all my strength.
    I will prove to you my loyalty.
    You will not stop me.
    I am one of the strongest there is.
    Strongest there ever will be.

    Because when you knock me down...
    When you kick me while i'm there...
    When you kick dirt in my face...
    When you burn my body...
    When you tell me i'm worthless...
    When you tell me i'm pathetic...

    I come back twice as strong.
    I come back twice as determined.
    Because i will rise from the ashes.
    And i will show you all...
    That i am the Immortal Phoenix.

    Submitted on 2013-12-20 16:28:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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