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    dots Submission Name: Circledots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 262/243/141
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 498
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1051



    Description:
       on line 19 I keep changing the word I just changed it from devastating to horrific.. humm I know there's a word I cant get it right. Any ideas???


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    hand drops
    Lifeless
    as if it knows
    It should be resting
    on your thigh.
    But this is the way it’s done
    Brick by brick
    Till the revelation
    She knows
    No… no …
    She has known
    From the beginning
    Silly floating die
    Sometimes it’s a game
    Keep your eyes on the cup
    Stop
    Now where is it?
    More often its
    horrific
    she even looks different
    that’s where she is now
    those moments before
    check mate
    they are the hardest
    She always gives an out
    Leaves a window cracked
    Forgets to lock the door
    Now’s your chance
    do it
    Tell her
    Aghh but you wont
    They never do
    That’s the thing
    What good is, knowing?
    Instead of a painful end
    It is a painful beginning
    Pain full throughout
    Makes her world ugly
    It’s lonely
    Yes that’s it
    She’s incredibly lonely.




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