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Mine


Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 186
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Mine



I want you to know
I love you
Nobody else
Will ever do
I just
Wanna hold you tight
Fall asleep
In your arms tonight
Baby yah know
Ima put up a fight
To keep you here
Happy
With me
Here I am on my knees
Begging
Pleading
Baby please don't leave me
We have so much meaning
I just wanna make you happy
Believe me
Trust me
See me
I just wanna show you
How happy you make me
From the bottom of my heart
The happiness you bring me
The love that you offer
The warmth when its freezing
From the bottom of my heart
Let me show you how I'm feeling
All the things I've experienced with you
Its so real
Nothing compares
To the value of your love
If came from anyone else
It would never be enough
Listen to me now
Baby
Hear me out
You know I'm yours
Til the end of time
I just hope
That when I die
I can still call you
Mine...




Submitted on 2013-12-21 18:17:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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