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    dots Submission Name: Minedots

    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    I want you to know
    I love you
    Nobody else
    Will ever do
    I just
    Wanna hold you tight
    Fall asleep
    In your arms tonight
    Baby yah know
    Ima put up a fight
    To keep you here
    With me
    Here I am on my knees
    Baby please don't leave me
    We have so much meaning
    I just wanna make you happy
    Believe me
    Trust me
    See me
    I just wanna show you
    How happy you make me
    From the bottom of my heart
    The happiness you bring me
    The love that you offer
    The warmth when its freezing
    From the bottom of my heart
    Let me show you how I'm feeling
    All the things I've experienced with you
    Its so real
    Nothing compares
    To the value of your love
    If came from anyone else
    It would never be enough
    Listen to me now
    Hear me out
    You know I'm yours
    Til the end of time
    I just hope
    That when I die
    I can still call you

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