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    dots Submission Name: Familydots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
    Total Views: 525
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       Just... Yeah..


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    dotsFamilydots
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    Family..
    Everybody's got one right?
    Wrong.
    You may say I do.
    You may think I do.
    You would be wrong.
    Family stays,
    It trusts,
    Even when they shouldn't.
    It cares,
    When nobody else does.
    It believes,
    Even you don't.
    I have nobody for that.
    One may say that I have them.
    But do you really?
    Family doesn't hurt family.
    I hurt everyone.
    I just mess up.
    Make constant mistakes.
    Yes you stay,
    But you don't want to.
    You wish we never met,
    You wish I could forget you.
    Family doesn't do that.
    Family doesn't exist.
    Well..
    At least for now,
    I have no true family..




    Submitted on 2013-12-21 23:23:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lots of kids in orphanages, keep your chin up, stiff upper lip man.
    | Posted on 2013-12-22 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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