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I Like Cars


Author: my shadow
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A nostalgia feel of of how cars used to be and how we felt about them then.


I Like Cars



I like hearing cars roaring down the road,
their radios beating out a pulse;
the smell of car fumes,
like the best perfumes

I like the seat pushing against me,
as I sit behind the wheel,
giving my car the gas
getting the road's feel

I like seeing people
moving their cars along;
some with a shout
some with a song

I like my car in the morning,
glistening with dew;
I like my car in the evening,
in the back seat with you




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  Youth and cars... In the days before internet they played a much bigger part of our lives. My kids could never imagine just cruising around town to see each other. They just use snap chat.
I have commuted 40 mile a day for most of the last 25 years and I love my car in the morning too. watching the sunrise over the countryside is one of my little pleasures.

Nicely done.
| Posted on 2015-03-11 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
  I like where you went with this. Quite a few
Of us find cars are not only an integral part of our
Lives but have had a profound influence on our spiritual
growth.
And the nurturing spirit of the back seat in grand america cars
is something that should never be forgotten.
As a side note I read somewhere that legislation has been
Preposed to add sound to electric cars!
| Posted on 2014-01-17 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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