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    dots Submission Name: I Like Carsdots

    Author: my shadow
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 291/150/48
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       A nostalgia feel of of how cars used to be and how we felt about them then.

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    dotsI Like Carsdots

    I like hearing cars roaring down the road,
    their radios beating out a pulse;
    the smell of car fumes,
    like the best perfumes

    I like the seat pushing against me,
    as I sit behind the wheel,
    giving my car the gas
    getting the road's feel

    I like seeing people
    moving their cars along;
    some with a shout
    some with a song

    I like my car in the morning,
    glistening with dew;
    I like my car in the evening,
    in the back seat with you

    Submitted on 2013-12-22 12:09:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Youth and cars... In the days before internet they played a much bigger part of our lives. My kids could never imagine just cruising around town to see each other. They just use snap chat.
    I have commuted 40 mile a day for most of the last 25 years and I love my car in the morning too. watching the sunrise over the countryside is one of my little pleasures.

    Nicely done.
    | Posted on 2015-03-11 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      I like where you went with this. Quite a few
    Of us find cars are not only an integral part of our
    Lives but have had a profound influence on our spiritual
    And the nurturing spirit of the back seat in grand america cars
    is something that should never be forgotten.
    As a side note I read somewhere that legislation has been
    Preposed to add sound to electric cars!
    | Posted on 2014-01-17 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

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