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    dots Submission Name: Dearest©™dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 263
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Love
    Total Views: 443
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1508



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       This is Don , my muse the reason i'm slayed my happiness whats worth fighting for


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    dotsDearest©™dots
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    Dearest i need you,
    i long to feel you next me
    intertwined with your legs next to mine

    The touch of your finger tips
    making me start to quiver ,
    like a lose set of arrows

    The warmth from your temple
    Sets my very body on fire
    with flames of love

    Embrace is like a rush of ecstasy
    that washes over all of my body
    to the tip of toes to my finger tips

    Your lips are the sweetest toxin
    to have ever have touched mine
    carving each one like candy

    Your eyes are the deepest blue
    i've ever to lay my eyes on
    Vast and deep like thee ocean

    Emotions i long to feel from you
    i want to know how deep they run
    inside of you , breathe me in
    i think i might drown ,here you are to help me now

    Stumbled , i wouln't be able to make a sound
    your deep words have moved me so
    Speechless with nothing to say at all

    Breathe-taking, when i look at you ,
    the way you slay me ,
    with the things you do

    Come Wash away the pain
    Cures what ails me
    Calm my rage ,control my heart

    I want nothing, more
    your all i need ,my dearest..
    my Am ore,my sun & stars
    for future for fate,
    i'm here to stay


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