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    dots Submission Name: Intoxicatingdots
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    Author: Big_Bill789
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 329/370/119
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIntoxicatingdots
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    Time has changed me
    And passed me by

    Who would ever think
    It could go this fast

    Sometimes I walk around
    And listen

    To the hums of the earth
    Enrapturing me

    Calling to my soul
    To return home

    I dream of endless days
    Laying in your arms

    I kiss you softly and squeeze you close
    I feel you far away

    Your shadow disappeared
    Erased by the unforgiving sun

    Do not fear
    Though we fall away from these memories

    We will find peace in our eternal love
    And drag it down with us
    Into the heart of the darkest oceans







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