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    dots Submission Name: New Binded 4/18/2007dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNew Binded 4/18/2007dots
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    binded by pain binded by sadness binded by all this madness
    your binded by how you feel it's so strong but is it real
    deep within your twisted mind twist and turns your sure to find
    concealed by love and hate and sadness you binded and twisted into this madness
    your thoughts that are concealed and your soul is blind wrapped like a thin twine
    binding your thoughts to your misery and your pain you find it hard just to sustain
    love and joy no longer exist in this binded world u can not live




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