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    dots Submission Name: 4/14/2007 Thoughtsdots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dots4/14/2007 Thoughtsdots
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    my most deepest thoughts contain you
    the way you speak and the way you move
    everyone doubting you and that hates hits
    you needles perceiving your skin as you run
    you can't hide from the pain
    trapped within your twisted mind
    makes you wonder how you survive ? thoughts
    of your unhappy life make you cry within
    each day that pass's a lil more of you fades away
    and the thoughts are what make you feel this way.




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