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    dots Submission Name: twisted(3-4-03)dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    she's so twisted she's so blind she's so lost she's out of her mind she's crazey with her twisted thoughts makes you wonder what went wrong?she's so dead not even barely breatheing traped within her lifeless body lays her broken heart that never mends gash's grew,still hurting from the pain inside she's twisted and tied and in a big bind by the pain that is concealed inside......




    Submitted on 2013-12-23 15:12:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You make a good picture of a person wrapped up in herself, unable to let go of the problem. I feel her pain.
    | Posted on 2013-12-29 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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