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    dots Submission Name: *Darkness*(3-4-03) inspired by sarah rose dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 44/25/55
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Vampire
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    dots*Darkness*(3-4-03) inspired by sarah rose dots
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    As darkness falls i see you quiver ,laying on your bed as you shiver your frighten of me,
    I am this darkness your running from me but as you run i follow
    i'm all around as you can see i am this darkness that never sleeps
    hide your heart don't let me in because if you do i'm sure to win




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