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    dots Submission Name: Darkness, Sorrow, and Feardots
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    Author: deadpoet
    ASL Info:    18/f/ Miami, Fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 44/66/27
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 285
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    Description:
       A few feeling of mine put in to words. i hope you like it. tell me what u think of it.


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    dotsDarkness, Sorrow, and Feardots
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    Darkness,
    The cloak under which
    A defeated soul wishes to be.

    Sorrow,
    The well
    In which that the soul finds itself.
    Looking up... standing against the
    Cold stone wall.

    The water is shallow,
    The well was abandoned
    Long ago.

    Fear,
    The pit of trapped souls
    Like quick sand
    Sucking in everything scared.

    Around the edge
    Stands the souls torturer
    Sending it away from
    Its santuary.

    From under th cloak it is brought fourth
    Into the well it is dropped
    Into the pit it was pushed.

    This soul... with
    Darness, sorrow and fear
    Thrust into it.

    Leaving this soul
    Suffocated, drowned
    And abandoned.




    Submitted on 2004-08-04 18:24:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I enjoy the darkness, and also the illustration of this one. I really like the ending.

    This soul... with
    darkness, sorrow and fear
    thrust into it.

    leaving this soul
    suffocated, drowned
    and abandoned.

    I connect to this on so many levels.
    good work
    | Posted on 2004-08-04 00:00:00 | by isaiahc4 | [ Reply to This ]



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