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    dots Submission Name: winter twilight loredots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 204/205/140
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       winter and the beauty of light


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    dotswinter twilight loredots
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    lights of the faintest
    with flickering, distant dim
    twilight lingers on into the vast
    as comets cross along and someone catches a glimpse

    the mind stirs for a moment wishing
    almost lost in prince and castles
    fairy dust and folklore
    escape to the gems of the heart and soul
    long ago

    winter breath with mitten comfort
    keep the frozen tundras darker
    in the night dream stars ignite
    flying by and so alive

    run to heights of lonely sights
    gather up!
    The Sun King cometh!
    gladness to all with warmth we long
    the coming days

    we mourn our losses
    grow strong with the renewal
    sing our song that carries us through
    the cycles of nature comforts and heals
    our darkness
    the light is in our eyes
    from the Winter's lonely radiance
    we wake from the longest sleep




    Submitted on 2013-12-24 06:29:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a very optimistic and uplifting feeling, a nostalgic glimpse of lore from yore, an almost cosmic glimpse of wherewithal from the stars, with a feel for the earthbound survival of species. You have expressed so many of the indomitable forms of spirit we as humans have to ponder. Well done, an inspirational read for a christmas eve morning as I shake off the sleep.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-24 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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