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    dots Submission Name: help medots

    Author: Blizzard
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    I've been running for years, trying to get away. But every time I think I’m fine, I want it again. I’m afraid, I’m terrified. What is to become of me if I drink again? Will I be fine or will it be like I was years ago? I’m still young, I’m new. I need help. So someone help me, please.

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