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    dots Submission Name: Good and Evildots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsGood and Evildots
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    I think I got it now.
    You were sent to me,
    Not to love,
    Not to care,
    Not to protect.
    You've shown me my purpose.
    My reason I'm on this damn planet.
    To equal it all out.
    The is just to much light right now.
    I must spread darkness.
    I must show hatred.
    I must carry anger everywhere I go.
    Just to make the world whole.
    I just ask of you one thing.
    Shine your light,
    As bright as you can,
    And I'll be your shadow,
    Cast my darkness on everyone else.
    You bring out the good,
    And I shall show them the evil.




    Submitted on 2013-12-25 22:25:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Alright! Makes sense, a little. There is good and bad. Man is evil.:)
    | Posted on 2013-12-31 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]
      Hah. The world is not as cruel as you make it out to be.
    | Posted on 2013-12-31 00:00:00 | by Akiko Hime | [ Reply to This ]


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