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    dots Submission Name: Lonelydots
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    Author: KimmyMim
    Elite Ratio:    4.4 - 223/303/117
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
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    Description:
       Someone please,
    flog me with a lightening bolt.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLonelydots
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    sucks
    I still don't know you want from me
    i am learning about distance

    I will be digging a little deeper this weekend
    south i think
    sometimes...I do like the dirt
    it has a cold earthy smell

    a good place to hide

    I just send that stuff to you for no reason
    I like to follow
    not since the little things keep popping up here and there
    rather many different kinds of little things
    are popping up here and there
    in more places
    more often

    like...an infection

    certainly...i'm not near as worried some
    or the masses since I hardly know the things they hide

    and even if I did...

    life deserves no punctuation




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    ||| Comments |||
      Well, you could always get into self-flagellation. Seriously just go out in the backyard, absorb some moonshine, whip out your tornado lariat, and lightning bow hat pick get down with it. In it's the back hoe up to of heights. I mean I realize the mud pie it doesn't amount to, seriously not the depths of pervasion armed animal, no cloaking devise, no anonymity, just the realization that perhaps you represent the realisms of human enigma armed entity……..Know your place in time, punctuation is everything, even if it doesn't represent the anything on the nothing.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-28 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      So I am reading Dan Brown's book Inferno and
    Just now deciding to take a little break
    and here you are
    Referencing the WHO and infections
    Makes a guy wonder is all I'm saying :-)
    | Posted on 2013-12-27 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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