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    dots Submission Name: Always A Rebounddots

    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsAlways A Rebounddots

    You had your shot, you missed it?
    Come, take refuge in my arms.
    You're feeling broken and weary?
    I'll save you from what harms.

    Help to build you up again,
    You feel safe enough to fly.
    Stand and watch you walk away.
    I start to wonder why.

    I nuture, love, and protect,
    But that's just not enough.
    My heart has been scarred again,
    I guess that makes it tough.

    Take up another task,
    To build up another spirit.
    Starting again, to get to close,
    You'd think I'd learn to fear it.

    Everyone's in need of love,
    I guess that's why I'm here.
    But just once I wish I had,
    Someone that held me dear.

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