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    Author: armand
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    blurred and blended thoughts
    of organized chaos
    one more ride
    one more trip on that night train
    escaping the secret monsters that
    follow in the day to day
    distance, distance is the key
    but there is none nor will there ever be




    consumption





    Submitted on 2013-12-28 14:00:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      blurred and blended thoughts
    of organized chaos

    that was an awesome beginning to something fabulous, thanks for this, it couldn't of been enjoyed more.

    Denise
    | Posted on 2014-02-24 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
      Loved how curt it is. The "organized chaos" of your piece, it makes one think. Is it "consumption" of the "monster" of daylight? Or consumption itself the monster we must maintain a distance from? Don't answer, of course. Just showing how it provokes.
    | Posted on 2014-01-10 00:00:00 | by Snow9 | [ Reply to This ]


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