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    dots Submission Name: Haters Bewaredots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/65/84
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHaters Bewaredots
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    Haters keep on hating
    But they're wasting their time
    Picking on a gorgeous girl
    That's a nasty crime
    You can't see her beauty
    But God sure can and does
    I can see her beauty too
    She's pretty now an always was
    So what if she's an "emo"
    Why does it concern you
    Are you jealous of her epicness
    What age are you, one or two
    Keep being immature brats
    But leave my sister be
    She has an awesome smile
    She's pretty as can be
    Next time you wanna hate
    Think before you speak
    Because I am her big sister
    And I'll make you look weak
    She's stronger than any of you
    All the ones to talk trash
    If I ever get my hands on you
    So help me, I'll kick your ass
    You're lucky I live far
    But be careful anyway
    Because I just might travel
    And beat you up some day




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      I hate the hate that resides in me now
    I hate the hate that has me tightly wound

    I hate the hate that has me in chains
    I hate the hate that courses through my veins

    I hate the hate that is a shadow at my side
    I hate the hate that has stolen my mind

    I hate the hate that blots out the stars
    I hate the hate that has created my war

    I hate the hate that has stolen my grace
    A scarlet letter written on my face

    - Adalie Hettie


    Just a poem I read recently. I sometimes wonder if bitter people wish they could unload the acid in their souls and learn to accept and befriend. Nicely done.
    | Posted on 2013-12-29 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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