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    dots Submission Name: Feeling Specialdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFeeling Specialdots
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    I don't need jewels or diamonds
    Not even a golden crown
    I don't need fancy dinners
    Or vacations out of town
    To feel just like a princess
    Which is just how I feel
    And which of this feeling
    From me no one can steal
    How can I possibly feel this
    Is it true what I'm telling you
    Can I really feel that special
    And really if so, by who
    His name is Deryl Morley
    A man with a caring heart
    It beats with love for me
    With God put at the start
    I know he will forever love me
    I will always be his special girl
    And while time passes by
    More love for me is unfurled
    I wouldn't dare leave his side
    For he will never leave mine
    And if people choose to ridicule
    That's all on their own time
    I will not fall out of this love
    For anyone or for any reason
    He is my one and only partner
    Together we stand in God's legion
    We are aiming for eternal life
    Into heaven we want to fly
    There will be no more earthly pain
    No more sad tears to cry
    Instead we'll live with Jesus
    In His Father's house we'll be
    And nobody on this planet
    Can take that from him, nor me




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