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    dots Submission Name: Bipolardots

    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 407
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    All emotions revealed
    In each state of mind
    Going forward at distance
    Only then to rewind
    Leaving now and forever
    I can't keep myself together

    Now I am surely calm
    Never ending peace of mind
    A heavy weight released
    With all these things combined
    In me there is no anger
    I am no longer in danger

    "I hate my life, I want to die
    I was just pretending all this time
    My life is worthless and so am I
    I hate my life, I want to die"

    I cannot stand to be me now
    The evil things are everywhere
    There is a demon inside of me
    I wish they'd only stop and stare
    But instead, my body they violate
    Soon they will start to penetrate

    A calm spirit I finally have
    Counting grains of destiny
    I am now smiling at my worst
    All my problems have been set free
    I am no longer ashamed
    My thoughts are always tame

    "I hate my life, I want to die
    I was just pretending all this time
    My life is worthless and so am I
    I hate my life I want to die"

    Thoughts burn scars in my mind
    There isn't time to fix my ways
    How can this disaster ever end
    I am stuck like this always
    Now I just drown in my hate
    This has become my deadly fate

    I have walked into the light
    The scars, they are no more
    Tasting freedom, freshly bred
    Solace is at my heart's core
    Ending all the darkened pain
    Finally feel that I am sane

    "I hate my life, I want to die
    I was just pretending all this time
    My life is worthless and so am I
    I hate my life, I want to die"

    Showing affection I do not have
    How can I live a decent life
    Knowing I'll never be okay
    All that's building now is strife
    I am just a pile of trash
    My caring has been turned to ash

    I am now completely fine
    But honestly I am not so
    There's hope for me, there has to be
    My happiness has never shown
    Life is just an endless dream
    Inside myself I always scream

    "I hate my life, I want to die
    I was just pretending all this time
    My life is worthless and so am I
    I hate my life, I want to die"

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    ||| Comments |||

    I feel this.

    The on and off emotions. And not just emotions, extreme emotions. Almost a different person emotions. Its a hard thing to fight through.

    Empty, depressed, GO ME-I CAN DO THIS, anger that burns.

    I just wanted to comment and let you know...

    This spoke to me.

    I'm glad you shared.
    | Posted on 2013-12-31 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      Christ, your killing me girl, how could one so beautiful want to die. Seriously these last three posts were a wonder to behold. I may be agnostic but I appreciate the attitude problem. In these things have been so since before the beginning.

    | Posted on 2013-12-28 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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