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    dots Submission Name: Valentin's Day Poem (by my husband)dots

    Author: TeslaKoyal
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    dotsValentin's Day Poem (by my husband)dots

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    You won't give up on me
    I won't give up on you
    God put us together
    No one can tear us apart
    I love you Cuddle Monster
    With all of my heart
    You are my princess
    And also my queen
    You will never understand
    How much you really mean
    I think about you always
    Every day and every night
    And when you kiss my lips
    Everything just feels right
    I remember the beach
    And walking in the sand
    When you got your feet wet
    And when I held your hand
    I remember the arcade
    When we won your prize
    The smile on your lips
    And the sparkle in your eyes
    There are more things to come
    Down the road for you and I
    We will be together always
    As time continues by
    We will go to the museum
    And the aquarium
    And we'll go camping
    Or the ecotarium
    Anywhere you want to go
    Even to the zoo
    I will go anywhere
    As long as I'm with you
    This is our first
    Valentine's day
    So I wrote this poem
    Just to say
    That even though
    We are apart
    Always know
    You have my heart
    Sara I will love you
    For the rest of my life
    Thank you so much for being
    My loving and caring wife
    Sometimes I can't believe
    That you are really mine
    Now and forever
    You are my valentine

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