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    dots Submission Name: Think Fastdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThink Fastdots
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    Think fast
    Am I really here
    Act fast
    But I have no fear
    No reason to fight
    No, not anymore
    There is nothing new
    It's all been done before
    Think fast
    Where am I now
    Speak fast
    I just look down
    No reason to care
    No, not anymore
    There's just nothing
    It's all been said before
    Think fast
    I'm here, I know I am
    Run fast
    But I don't give a damn
    No reason to leave
    No, not anymore
    But there is a reason
    It has not been done before




    Submitted on 2013-12-28 23:16:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      May I suggest my post "Aura Queen". I agree totally 'it was due yesterday'.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-28 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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