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    dots Submission Name: *Lost*dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dots*Lost*dots
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    lost i find myself spinning
    can't seem to find the right path
    i only keep myself from winning

    to many twist and way to many turns
    up hill down hill

    to the left then to the right

    where is the in between ,
    where things don't stay the same
    but the meaning is so much greater

    happiness i cling onto hope
    but i feel as though i'm drowning

    Comfort seems to find me
    are you to good to be true ?

    But what are you to me
    it just seems i'm lost in you

    I'm happy , i love you
    but giving all that I am
    Though i'm losing site of me

    Digging deeper , i'm so lost





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