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    dots Submission Name: A Diary of a BCGdots
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    Author: Apoetwcloudenvy
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    Words: 257
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsA Diary of a BCGdots
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    I told you I want to talk to you but you thought I wanted to holla at you maybe I am but you wouldn’t listen anyways

    Love stained from our meeting
    Hate and confusing feel the empty air space around us
    Moving on in these short days with long nights
    Breathing to the clouds tempo
    I wonder if it ever will happen
    Somehow I wonder if you have some scatter feeling
    Yet won’t show them
    To me because of all the wrong
    That took place within you past
    Impossible standards
    Yet you nurse their wounds but reject my blessing
    Showing no remorse to the gentle spirit
    But collapsing on the rough jagged edges of broken dreams
    Distance within your past
    Only focused of the worst
    Yet not looking toward future
    Because if a girls best friend is diamonds
    You want to worry about that
    Because over time I will become that
    Just by giving me a time you will find out the blessing you will receives
    But until then just keep thinking and not moving forward
    Just know I be by the phone waiting for that rings of your heart


    RWIJ




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