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    dots Submission Name: Still Heredots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 396
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsStill Heredots
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    When my smile fades
    When my tears fall
    When my world shakes
    When I want to end it all
    You're still here

    When my mind rots
    When I feel dark inside
    When I feel distant
    When I just want to hide
    You're still here

    When I'm screaming
    When I'm crying
    When I'm dreaming
    When I feel like I'm dying
    You're still here

    When I fall down
    When I want to fight
    When my days drag
    When I can't sleep at night
    You're still here

    You made me happy
    You wiped the tears from my face
    You made me giggle
    You put my smile back in it's place
    You're still here

    The light is near
    I'm closer now
    My mind is clear
    I'm coming out
    You're still here

    I'm redirected
    No need for alarm
    I'm protected
    I'm safe from harm
    You're still here

    You may feel the same
    Or maybe you don't
    But you are not leaving
    I know you won't
    You're still here

    And when you are down
    When you feel defeated
    Just think of me
    And the way you are treated
    I'm still here

    When people are mean
    When words start to hurt
    You want to give up
    You feel lower than dirt
    I'm still here

    When you feel weak
    When you want to cry
    Look in my eyes
    And you'll know why
    I'm still here

    You are not a monster
    You are not a bad man
    How can you be
    When I'm holding your hand
    I'm still here

    I am your angel
    I am your queen
    I am your princess
    I'm the woman of your dreams
    And I'm still here

    You'll never lose me
    I'll never lose you
    I know you love me
    And I love you too
    We're still here

    You are my husband
    I am your wife
    The old is all over
    God gave us new life
    He's still here

    He made us both
    He gave me to you
    His love everlasting
    His love pure and true
    He's still here

    He gave us a reason
    To live and move on
    Without our Savior
    We'd be dead and gone
    We're still here

    He put us together
    And now we are one
    This new life of ours
    Has only begun
    And we, my love, we're still here




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