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    dots Submission Name: Controldots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5/121/135
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 995
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 432



    Description:
       I don't really know why this came to my head but it did.


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    dotsControldots
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    Black,
    Is what I see.
    Black.
    Is what I bleed.
    You.
    Can't believe.
    The truth.
    Inside me.
    I.
    Lose control.
    I.
    Hurt those I love.
    Hate.
    Boils over.
    Anger.
    It takes over.
    I've lost all control..
    Of the life I came to know..
    Please.
    Stay out of my way.
    I.
    Will kill you all today.




    Submitted on 2013-12-30 23:54:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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