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    dots Submission Name: Controldots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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       I don't really know why this came to my head but it did.

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    Is what I see.
    Is what I bleed.
    Can't believe.
    The truth.
    Inside me.
    Lose control.
    Hurt those I love.
    Boils over.
    It takes over.
    I've lost all control..
    Of the life I came to know..
    Stay out of my way.
    Will kill you all today.

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