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    dots Submission Name: Music is more than breathingdots
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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 335/330/93
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMusic is more than breathingdots
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    I find myself,
    lost in a collaboration.

    Of musical pitches,
    listening's sensation.

    To be able to find it..
    and stay within its "move"

    to be able to have an understanding,
    its nothing to prove.

    whatever the melody,
    one for every mood.

    Have a healthy musical appetite
    whatever your taste of "food".




    Submitted on 2013-12-31 16:50:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aural auger auspice austerities……..accedence ambience acoustics…………as a musician I like to feel I know these things!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-31 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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