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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    23/Female/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.68 - 277/293/232
    Words: 233
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    Bytes: 1346



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    Every night I sit and drink until I fall asleep
    Because it's what we used to do
    I keep praying that one day you would come back to me
    But it doesn't seem like you want to.
    My drunken lullaby plays over again in my head
    Breaking through my heavy tears.
    You said tonight you would be here again in my bed
    But you just confirmed my fears.

    It's not fair for you to think it's okay to treat me this way
    Or for me to keep loving you.
    I should let go but I don't seem to have the strength
    And it's not something I want to do
    So I keep running right back to you.

    Another night went by with me sitting here alone
    Another night you led me on.
    My tears leaving my pillow soaking wet
    The bottle of Jameson almost gone.
    I want to leave behind all the pain you cause me
    To just forget about you.
    It's so easy for you to walk away from what's been built
    But not as easy for me to do.

    It's not fair for you to think it's okay to treat me this way
    Or for me to keep loving you.
    I should let go but I don't seem to have the strength
    And it's not something I want to do
    So I keep running right back to you.




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      Sounds as if you have somebody your trying to get over...good luck.
    ~Tay
    | Posted on 2014-01-06 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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