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    dots Submission Name: From Lust To Lovedots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFrom Lust To Lovedots
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    It does not exist
    Not in my crippled mind
    In my tortured soul
    Nor in my tormented heart
    Lust takes over

    As I grow colder
    My life seems to linger
    Inside a body so tense
    I'm corrupt in many ways
    Lust takes over

    One small strand left
    Of what should have been
    How could it end this way
    No chance to change it now
    Lust takes over

    It happened too quickly
    I did not know why
    What was this horrid feeling
    Deeply broken inside
    Lust takes over

    A flood of darkness
    Where should I go
    Here in my silent room
    Until forever comes
    Lust takes over

    Pointed out by who
    I simply do not matter
    For I am not me
    Trapped in myself
    Lust takes over

    Falling into a world
    Not of my own
    My body lifeless
    My mind infected
    Lust takes over

    Realizing it wasn't me
    I didn't break myself
    It was their fault
    Not me, only them
    Lust took over

    Dirty girl, I am not
    Ugly freak, I am not
    Filthy whore, I am not
    I am not what they did to me
    Lust took over

    My life is finally mine
    No longer chained inside
    I have purpose in life
    Married, I am
    Love takes over
    No, love took over
    No, love is forever






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