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    dots Submission Name: How We Metdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHow We Metdots
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    Over to a friend's house
    I'd go only to be
    Degraded as usual
    One day I was invited
    To go on a bowling trip
    It wasn't my friend
    But his friend
    Who wanted me to go
    We finally met
    Went out to eat
    And went bowling
    There was flirting
    Though I did not know
    He stared at me
    I stared at him
    We didn't know it
    Just before leaving
    I said we should text
    He agreed and we did
    Almost all day
    We texted
    Until we planned
    To meet again
    Our mutual friend backed out
    So we had time alone
    Lots of time alone
    Our love grew quickly
    Time spent was amazing
    He asked me to marry him
    At the most awkward time
    I said yes
    We got married
    He went into prison
    One month later
    I knew he had to go
    But still we're together
    It's been over a year
    Since he's been gone
    Though we're holding on
    It hurts very much
    To be apart
    But one day soon
    We will be reunited
    And we'll have each other
    For the rest of our lives




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