[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: How We Metdots

    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 603
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1230


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHow We Metdots

    Over to a friend's house
    I'd go only to be
    Degraded as usual
    One day I was invited
    To go on a bowling trip
    It wasn't my friend
    But his friend
    Who wanted me to go
    We finally met
    Went out to eat
    And went bowling
    There was flirting
    Though I did not know
    He stared at me
    I stared at him
    We didn't know it
    Just before leaving
    I said we should text
    He agreed and we did
    Almost all day
    We texted
    Until we planned
    To meet again
    Our mutual friend backed out
    So we had time alone
    Lots of time alone
    Our love grew quickly
    Time spent was amazing
    He asked me to marry him
    At the most awkward time
    I said yes
    We got married
    He went into prison
    One month later
    I knew he had to go
    But still we're together
    It's been over a year
    Since he's been gone
    Though we're holding on
    It hurts very much
    To be apart
    But one day soon
    We will be reunited
    And we'll have each other
    For the rest of our lives

    Submitted on 2014-01-01 18:47:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      Is this a true story about yourself?
    | Posted on 2014-02-12 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Push written by JanePlane
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    True Death written by layDsayD
    AI written by poetotoe
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Summer written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]