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    dots Submission Name: Surprise dots

    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSurprise dots

    Life is full of surprises......
    when we think we've lost
    all that was gained
    only to start at the beginning
    once more...
    of what was everything
    at the end
    we'll see love clearly
    for the first time
    thank God for our fall
    that brought us low
    now is the time
    to rise high again...together
    above all, our regrets and broken dreams
    the flight itself proves nothing
    for all departures leave the same
    It's the landfall that crowns our voyage!

    Submitted on 2014-01-02 17:46:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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