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    dots Submission Name: tough morningsdots

    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       i more than miss you. i need you.

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    dotstough morningsdots

    I got so use to falling asleep on your chest
    That since you left my nights have been
    Nothing but constant tossing and turning.
    I clutch my chest where my heart is located
    And feel this emptiness that consumes me

    I got use to waking up to your tickles and your smile
    And you planting seeds of kisses throughout my body
    Now I wake up cold and sad and angry

    I looked forward to what the day would bring
    With you filled with so much joy
    Now this house has the echo of your laughter
    And the essence of a body that is no longer here.

    Submitted on 2014-01-03 11:29:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am missing some one right now and the way u wrote
    This is How I feel. You seem to write my feelings
    A lot. :-)
    | Posted on 2014-01-14 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

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