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    dots Submission Name: Winter Dreamdots

    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWinter Dreamdots

    I dream about sitting with you
    under the ever-green leaves of the morning,
    soaking up the cold winter sun
    and drinking in your light.

    I long for the smell of cedar trees,
    flannel sheets, and the feel of your cold feet
    pressed against mine
    as we slowly drift off to sleep.

    I want it so much that it makes my heart ache
    at the thought of our footprints in the snow,
    leading up to the door of our home and
    the trails in the woods of the acres beyond.

    When I close my eyes, I travel thousands of miles
    until I am next to you, sitting by the fire,
    holding your hand,
    and telling you that I love you.

    Submitted on 2014-01-03 18:02:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww so sweet. The flow seemed real good...nothing I can pick at that pops out to me. Sounds like you have a far off lover that your missing. I know the feeling.
    | Posted on 2014-01-06 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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