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    dots Submission Name: Drunk Haikudots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDrunk Haikudots
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    Sometimes I get drunk,

    and I write poems about you.

    Hope that isn't weird.




    Submitted on 2014-01-03 20:10:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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