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    dots Submission Name: Barrendots
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    Author: MysterydarkPoet
    ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157/295/173
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Fingering the blame
    Could it be me?
    Could it be a harsh twist of fate?
    Arguing and fighting between
    One side strong,
    And one side crying
    Whilst continuously struggling
    To battle the journey
    With a shattered dream,
    & All hope frozen in defeat


    But the dawn is on the horizon
    And the flowers are in bloom
    There’s a rainbow to this storm
    Encouraging me to move,
    Still –
    My heart feels so empty
    Like there’s someone missing
    That I’ve never known at all.




    Submitted on 2014-01-03 23:45:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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