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    dots Submission Name: Wardots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 5/114/129
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 523
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    dotsWardots
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    Hoods up,
    Heads down,
    Here we go men,
    Let me lead you into battle,
    I will bring you greatness.
    I will bring you the sanctuary,
    The sanctuary that you've always dreamt of.
    I can bring you all there.
    There is only one thing I ask,
    Fight along side me.
    Be able to give your life for me and I'll do the same.
    Help me win this war,
    Help me get revenge on those who hurt me.
    Then your salvation will be guaranteed,
    Granted by the higher power itself.
    Take my hand and I'll lead us to victory.
    All I need is your support,
    For you to fight and believe.
    And happiness is what you will receive in return.
    So what do you say?
    Will you join me and be saved?
    Or defy me and be destined for destruction?




    Submitted on 2014-01-07 04:28:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      :) nice job
    | Posted on 2014-01-07 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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