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    dots Submission Name: A Restless mind with a Hopeless heartdots
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    Author: Apoetwcloudenvy
    Elite Ratio:    1.44 - 6/9/10
    Words: 294
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    dotsA Restless mind with a Hopeless heartdots
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    We all have ideas
    Dreams
    Even perfect scenarios
    We envision

    But reality
    Tears those thoughts apart
    And
    Breaks those dreams
    Down to mush
    Trampling on all
    We want

    When we look at it
    Some want this
    Some want that
    But I want love

    I feel at this particular moment I haven't reach nor fought that person
    A person that complements me
    My inner me

    Its tiresome to aid someone else
    Through they insecurities
    But forsake mines
    What it all boles down
    To
    I just want to feel and be happy

    I hide behind
    my schooling
    My Nonchalant attitude
    Even suppressing
    My true feelings
    For the sake of
    Other peoples emotions

    In the end
    all I want is something
    Meaningful
    To know the true meaning of
    Love

    I must say I've tried holding on
    But I'm tired of holding and just leaking
    Certain portions out

    I look around and everyones
    Finding his and her match
    Whether those match are permanent or seasonal
    Its working

    I feel I'm invisible
    To the opposite sex
    In most cases I'm just
    The nice person everyone knows
    Thats going somewhere
    Who`s just transparent
    Its hard to see why so many individuals
    Look over me or Give me a chance
    I worry its
    My physical appearance
    Even my aura
    Or
    Just them

    In all
    In all I just want to fill relevant
    That I am wanted
    But I guess that is just wishful thinking




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